Creak creak creak
The door is
Creaking
Screech screech screech
The bird is
Screeching
This is a poem I rote at school using onomatopoeia
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Creak creak creak
The door is
Creaking
Screech screech screech
The bird is
Screeching
This is a poem I rote at school using onomatopoeia
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Great experiment with onomatopoeia Charley! I would have liked to have heard more about the noises around the house, you could have really made it into a story poem I think. Did you think about presenting it on a Google Drawing with a background? Keep up the great writing Charley.
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